masterghandalf

This girl is actually Too Stupid To Live. You don't normally see such bad cases outside of the romance genre. Which... Honestly I've read some really awful romances that are better than anything Greenwood's written.


I've mentioned previously, but I think Greenwood was trying to write Shandril as a naïve audience surrogate, but overdid it to the point that she just comes off as completely ignorant of basic things. As for mentioning Greenwood in the same breath as bad romance... well, let's just say that next chapter is when Shandril and Narm actually meet properly, and as for how he handles that relationship, well...

Well this Torm is gonna be SMOTE and smote HARD. Bearing that particular god's name and worshipping the diametric opposite of basically everything he believes in that ISN'T named Cyric? Ahahahahahha boy you fuckin' dead.


And Cyric's not even a god yet (this series being pre-Time of Troubles) so yeah, you could easily say Mask is Torm (the god's) opposite without qualifications;).

Oh, he dead.


Well, he would be dead, if he didn't have plot armor. Seriously, the resolution to this chapter's cliffhanger is really anticlimactic.