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Chapter 1: The Sorceress and the Mercenary

Thyra Entarro steeled herself and squared her shoulders as she regarded the building that stood across the bustling street from where she sat. It wasn’t much to look at, being to all appearances an utterly unremarkable inn, neither particularly fine nor particularly run down. It was, in all outward aspects, in no way distinct from the dozens of other establishments like it in this part of Sharn alone.

There was nothing at all to suggest that this was the place where, hopefully, Thyra would take the first steps towards her salvation.

Breathing deeply, the young woman stood, brushed down her plain skirt almost reflexively, and crossed the street. It was now or never. The building might not look like much, and she had no direct knowledge of the people she was going to meet, but Taras had told her that they would be perfectly suited to the job she needed done, and if there was one thing she had learned in the last two years, it was that Taras Zanthan was seldom wrong.

The interior of the inn’s common room was as nondescript as its outside. True, the clientele was a diverse lot, as to be expected from a city that saw as many travelers as Sharn – Thyra was certain that the man in one corner dressed in plain but well-made clothes and a vaguely disapproving expression had to be Riedran, of all nationalities – but as it was only mid-afternoon, the crowd was relatively sparse and fairly calm. Picking her way through the room, she slowly made her way to the back, towards the usual table of the person whom she had come here to meet.

Suddenly, Thyra stopped cold, a slight prickling sensation running up the back of her neck, as though she was being watched. Brushing a lock of golden-brown hair away from her face, trying to look nonchalant, the young woman slowly turned to see an out-of-the-way table where sat a pale, slender elf woman in unadorned white, who seemed to be regarding her intently over the hands she held clasped before her. She had silvery-blonde hair that glinted in the afternoon sun, and that ageless elven beauty that made her look like she could be anywhere from eighteen to forty, if she was human, but was probably over a century in truth. Thyra didn’t know why the elf’s scrutiny bothered her so much, save perhaps that it seemed so… intense, as if the elf knew more about her than a stranger by all rights should. Thyra realized her mouth was open and steeled herself to ask what, exactly, was so interesting, but before she could do so, she was interrupted.

“Is something the matter, girl, or did you simply never bother to learn manners?” a sharp voice asked suddenly from nearby; female, but not the elf’s. Thyra turned back towards the direction in which she’d originally been going and saw the speaker, a tall, lean human who relaxed casually at one of the other tables, mug in front of her. She had black hair pulled back in a braid, wore a heavy black coat over travel-worn shirt and pants, and had a burly hobgoblin hovering protectively behind her, arms crossed.

Thyra relaxed; the scene was exactly as she’d been told it would probably be. Time to take the plunge “Captain Len of the Wandering Blades?” she asked.

“And what business is it of yours if I am?” the woman asked her, taking a slow drink from her mug. Despite the sharp tone, there was an interested glint in Len’s eyes, and Thyra had the sudden feeling she was playing the same part she did with anyone who looked like they might be a client, gauging their resolve.

“My name is Thyra,” she said finally. “And I’d like to hire you.”

Len raised an eyebrow and shot a skeptical glance at the hobgoblin, who shrugged. “You look a little young to be hiring mercenaries, kid, but if you’ve got the gold I’m willing to listen. So go ahead,” she said lightly, “take a seat. Let’s hear your offer.”

Thyra did so smoothly, folding her hands in front of her and regarding the older woman wh sat across from her. Len looked to be about ten years her senior – making her probably about twenty-nine or thirty – and had a general air of tough competence about her. Not surprising, considering Taras’s informants had assured them that she’d served in Breland’s army for years before the war ended, and had an exemplary record. Yes, Thyra found herself thinking, this might well be the person for the job. The captain looked to be sizing her up as well. “So, you’re name’s Thyra,” she said casually. “That’s a form of “Tira”, if I’m not mistaken, as in Tira Miron, founder of the Church of the Silver Flame. Going by that and the accent, I’d hazard a guess that you’re Thranish, and probably a follower of the Flame too, or at least your parents are, am I right?”

“You’d be right,” Thyra said, rather more stiffly than she’d intended. “I trust that won’t be a problem? The War is over, after all.”

Len shrugged. “Probably not news to you that I fought for Breland and so did most of my team, but… well, we all did things we’re not proud of during the War, and I’m not terribly interested in carrying out old grudges if it gets in the way of my business. Besides, I mostly saw action against Karrnath, and I’ve got no hard feelings against Thrane or the Flame. Now, with the introductions out of the way, what exactly is the nature of the job for which you intend to hire me? I must confess, I’m a bit curious as to what a nice Flame girl like you wants with a scruffy soldier like me.”

“I am a student at Morgrave University,” Thyra said, “but my family are merchants back in Thrane. Not hugely wealthy, but we’ve been decently successful. About a week ago, I received a letter from home saying that some valuable property had been stolen from us. We believe that the thief fled Thrane immediately upon having completed the job. I would like to hire you and your team to assist me in recovering the stolen property.” The lie came easily to her lips, now; the Flame knew she’d practiced it enough.

“Ah,” Len said, folding her hands. “I believe you have me confused with an inquisitive, or perhaps a Sentinel Marshal. I’m a mercenary. Hunting down an unknown thief across Khorvaire is not exactly my area of expertise, nor is solving mysteries. Get back to me when you have someone you want a sword stuck in, and we’ll talk.”

“You don’t need to hunt him, and he’s not unknown,” Thyra said. “We know who is behind the theft, and he’s rather… more than what my father is willing to tangle with through strictly legal channels. His name is Kharvin ir’Sarrin, and he’s a Karrnathi warlord.”

“Hmmm,” the big hobgoblin said, speaking for the first time; his voice was deep and surprisingly smooth. “So it’s not an investigation, then. Sounds more like a raid.”

“Yes,” Thyra said. “That’s exactly right. I need you and your team to help me break into ir’Sarrin’s manor, find the property in question, and get out without causing an incident between a Karrnathi aristocrat and a family of Thranish merchants. I was told that your team specialized in odd jobs and daring escapades. Are you interested?”

“That depends,” Len said. “First off, what exactly is the “property” in question? I’m not terribly interested in risking my neck for family jewelry or your grandfather’s favorite hunting trophies.”

“It’s a map,” Thyra said. “A map which depicts the location of a treasure buried since the Age of Demons. My father had intended to sponsor a mission to excavate the ruins and sell the findings to whatever museums, institutions, or aristocrats across Khorvaire might be interested.” She chewed her lip for a moment, then began to improvise. “I’ll be frank – some of father’s most recent business dealings have fallen through, and his competitors are sniffing around. If he doesn’t strike something big, things could bode ill for my family. If he does, then trust me when I say he’ll be very grateful to anyone who helped him.”

“And presumably, his gratitude will have a monetary nature,” Len added. “Which leads me to my next question – how much, exactly, are you going to be paying us?”

“Fifty galifars a piece, up front, for each member of your team,” Thyra said. “At least as much upon the successful completion of the mission, as per the amount of difficulty endured. If the map does lead to a valuable find, you’ll also receive a cut of the profits – say, ten percent?”

“Not bad, not bad at all,” Len muttered, rubbing her chin. “You have any input, Ghazaan?”

“Well,” the hobgoblin said, focusing on Thyra intently, “I do have one big question. Kid says she wants us to help her break in. I’m wondering why she wants to go along, and why we should put up with it?” Both he and Len fixed her with equal cold gazes, and Thyra suddenly had the feeling that the captain had known exactly what Ghazaan would ask her.

The young woman ignored their stares. “This task is important to my family. I want to make certain it is carried out properly. And while I told you I was a student, I didn’t specify that I was a student of the arcane. If you need another spellcaster, I can fill the role.” Thyra was not, of course, a student of magic; she was a student of comparative mythology. Her magic was in her blood, and it ultimately came from … unusual sources.

Len shook her head. “I can’t tell if you’re brave, paranoid, or just plain stupid, kid. You’ve got guts, anyway. Most of the time, when someone hires mercenaries they sit back on the sidelines and let us do the work. In any case, I’m still not certain having you along is the best idea. People like me tend not to get paid – or hired again – when we let our employers get killed on us.”

“Trust me,” Thyra said, “I’ll be worth it. Just give me a chance.” As she spoke, she reached deep inside herself – into that part of herself she’d sworn by her namesake and the Silver Flame to never use unless she needed it – and wove magic into her words, just enough to give them a slight edge of persuasiveness.

Ghazaan smiled and nodded, but Len’s eyes suddenly opened wide. Grabbing the hobgoblin by the arm, the captain leapt to her feet and stalked off towards the hallway behind the common room, dragging her companion behind her. Thyra stared speechlessly behind her, uncertain how to reach – or indeed, how her magic had provoked that reaction. A moment later, the elf woman who’d been watching her earlier slipped off to join the mercenaries.

/ / /

“What was that about, Boss?” Ghazaan demanded once he and Len were in the empty hallway. “The girl made a good point. And why do I always have to be the ominous, looming one?”

“You get to be ominous because you’re seven feet tall and have fangs,” Len hissed, poking him in the chest “and the girl’s argument wasn’t what was convincing. She was using magic to make herself more persuasive.”

“That wasn’t like any spell I’ve ever seen,” Ghazaan retorted.

“I don’t think it was a spell, and certainly not a potion,” Len muttered. “I think it was some natural ability. Trust me on this one, big man. You know I know what I’m talking about. Now, on the one hand, the girl did just make a better argument for her competence than anything else she’s done so far. On the other, she’s just proven herself extremely untrustworthy. By the Traveler, I’m honestly tempted to throw her job offer back in her face right now, cut of her profits or no.”

The door to the hallway opened again and Yhani stepped inside, the elf managing, as always, to look poised and elegant despite her plain attire. “Care to explain what that was about?” she asked in her lilting, musical Aereni accent. “Blood of my ancestors, Len, if that girl had slapped you I don’t think you would have reacted like you did.”

“I don’t like it when people try to mess with my head, and you know it,” Len said. Then she sighed. “I need your advice, Yhani. On the one hand, this job could be exactly what we need right now, after the last one went… well, you know. On the other, after what that girl – Thyra, if “Thyra” is even her real name – tried to pull, I don’t trust a word out of her mouth. I’m half convinced that she’ll try to backstab us once the job is done and we’ll never see a crown. Or worse, she’ll get us all killed.”

Yhani paused quietly for several moments. “I cannot make this decision for you, Len. My head tells me that this is dangerous and we should walk away. My heart… my heart says, this is important, and it is about more than one human girl and her map. This… may be where we are needed.”

Len groaned. “Oh, ‘Hani. Mysticism isn’t my area, and you know it. But I do trust your instincts, which are right more often than is damn good for them. If you think it’s important, then it probably is. We’ll take the damn job.” The captain looked down at her booted feet and sighed. “This had better not get us all killed.”

/ / /

Thyra looked up from her seat to see Captain Len approaching, flanked by Ghazaan on one side and the elf woman on the other. “I accept your offer,” Len said, “on one condition.” She bent down in Thyra’s face and hissed into her ear. “Don’t use magic on me or mine again without my express permission ever again. You see, I know a little myself, and if you try, don’t think I won’t recognize what you’re up to – and if I don’t, Yhani here will. Keep that in mind, and I think we can have a good working relationship. Agree?”

“Agree,” Thyra said, torn between guilt at having been caught, and elation that the captain had listened anyway. “In that case, you’re hired.”

“Glad to hear it,” Len said, and though she smiled, there was a faint undercurrent of danger to her voice nonetheless. “So, what say I’ll buy you a drink, and then we’ll talk about further details of this job you want us to do.”

“Well, there is one thing,” Thyra said slowly. This would have to come up sooner or later; better that it was sooner, and at her initiative. “Lord ir’Sarrin? Is suspected of being a member of the Order of the Emerald Claw.”

/ / /

And so it begins. This chapter was mostly an introduction to two of our main characters – Thyra and Len (with a bit of Yhani and Ghazaan, too). Why did I make my two most important leads both women? One, because the stereotypical adventuring party is male-heavy enough that I wanted to shake things up a bit. Two, because even though I’m a guy, I generally prefer writing female protagonists. Thyra, you’ve probably noticed, is a bit of a chronic liar, but it’ll be a while before we find out the whole truth. That’s not to say Len doesn’t have her secrets too…

Mechanically speaking, Thyra’s a sorcerer (probably pretty obvious) and Len’s a magus (for those not familiar with Pathfinder rules, the magus class blends element of fighter and wizard, and seemed fitting for the relatively common state of magic in Eberron). Also keep in mind that Thyra’s decidedly uncomfortable with her powers. There’s a reason…

Also, I was able to create some pictures of my characters using DollDivine's RPG Heroine Creator. The model only works for female characters, so no Ghazaan, but at least I was able to get the ladies.

Here's Thyra:  photo Thyra early_zps1caycmhp.png Len:  photo Len 2_zpsclr4lmjo.png and Yhani:  photo Yhani 2_zpsipdhqyu3.png

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